Comments on: Review: Frozen Embers by Sasha Skye http://speakitsname.com/2009/11/05/frozen-embers-by-sasha-skye/ Gay Historical Fiction Tue, 07 Feb 2012 21:51:35 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Erastes http://speakitsname.com/2009/11/05/frozen-embers-by-sasha-skye/#comment-1893 Mon, 16 Nov 2009 12:29:05 +0000 http://speakitsname.wordpress.com/?p=1342#comment-1893 Hi Sasha, and thank you for your kind comments. I wish all authors were as polite. I will also amend the review to reflect what you said about the americanisms and good luck with your writing!

]]> By: Sasha Skye http://speakitsname.com/2009/11/05/frozen-embers-by-sasha-skye/#comment-1892 Mon, 16 Nov 2009 12:25:20 +0000 http://speakitsname.wordpress.com/?p=1342#comment-1892 Thank you for the review of my first short story. You are the second person to mention about the doctor being Danish…believe it or not, it is not because of Hans C. Anderson…:)

There are flashbacks in the story, (Ashley remembering the cold of his room) and Ashley was in and out of consciousness for a week (he did not recover until New Years Eve, one week later) Im sorry, that was not clear.

One improves their craft by listening to the constructive criticism of others, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my short story.

A side note apology… I did send my editor the re-writes to correct the “Americanisms” (Back in June 2009). You should have received that version, not the one with ‘sidewalk’, “fall vs autumn’ etc…I now have a friend (from Canterbury, Kent England) who corrects/edits my “Americanisms”.

Sasha

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