Review: As Time Goes By by Anna Lee

In 1944, Matt Jackson, a wounded RAF pilot, ends up in the Royal Infirmary after his squadron is attacked. When he meets Doctor Trynt Andrews, both men’s lives are changed with the instant connection they feel for one another. Alone and injured, Matt is invited into Trynt’s home and they become inseparable, finding a love they thought they never would. As the year goes by, their commitment deepens despite having to keep their love a secret. When Matt is deployed and his plane goes down during battle will all be lost? Or will he make it home to Trynt?

Review by Erastes

Ok. Here’s the thing. When you know a fandom, it’s very difficult to read a book that’s obviously converted fanfic when it hasn’t been converted well enough to expunge all traces of the original canon.  I know how difficult this is–I used to write fanfic, and I have two novellas at least that I’m very proud of, but the work involved in making them entirely unrecognisable as to where they came from would be as hard work as writing something entirely new–so I haven’t done it.

And in this case–which is obviously Torchwood fanfic, it’s a shame, because the writing is decent enough to carry a story throughout.

But when you have an RAF Captain Matt (with an RAF greatcoat that becomes a sexual object in itself) who falls in love with a dark-haired, blue-eyed Welshman–now called Trynt–and then you have an assorted cast who are obviously name-changed versions of Torchwood’s cast: Gwen becomes Wynne, the gap-toothed Welsh nurse; Toshiko is now Kimioko,  Trynt’s room-mate etc etc–then I for one have difficulty reading it as an original story at all because I’m translating it back to fanfic in my head.

OK. Putting that aside, I couldn’t like this book at all. The writing is perfectly serviceable, no complaints there, but it’s just far too saccharine for my, and I’m guessing many people’s tastes.

Captain Matt wakes in a hospital after a terrible accident with his squadron where everyone has died, including his own lover and he almost immediately falls in love with his doctor, who of course, falls almost immediately back in love with him. The two men are femininely  sensitive to the point of hysteria, fall in love instantly and are touching, kissing, hugging and weeping on each other’s shoulders within a day of meeting. All this in a hospital in 1944…

There then follows half a book of their relationship building. This consists of Matt recovering–having moved in with Trynt and them having long girly talks, sleeping together but not actually doing anything. But there is a lot of talk and weeping. For the first 25% of the book one or other of them is just about crying on every page. It was ludicrously inconsistent with a doctor and a flight captain, and also was out of character for the fanfic counterparts.

Here’s just one sample of this overblown schmoopiness: (this conversation is happening during penetration while Matt rides Trynt’s cock)

“I know our love is strong enough to outlast whatever this war throws at us. And despite it, I promise I will do everything I can to make you happy and give you the life you want.”

“You already have, Matt.” Trynt began to thrust slowly as he held on to Matt. “All I want is a life with you. I want all the plans we just made.  And I won’t let anything stop us from having them; we’re going to build that life together. I know our love can overome whatever happens.”  He cupped Matt’s face in his hands, gazing into his stormy blue eyes. “And you’ll never be alone again. I’ll always be here for you, loving you with all my heart and making you happy. I didn’t know what true happiness or love was until you came along, now it all makes sense. You’re my whole word Matt and I couldn’t love you more. And I certainly couldn’t ask for anything more than to be here with you just this,” he admitted, then kissed Matt passionately, pouring all his feelings into the kiss.

“I love you too.” Matt slowly lifed himself up and then back down on Trynt’s cock. “Always, Trynt.”

“Always,” Trynt vowed.

This type of conversation goes on for pages, as does the sex which is very coy, to be honest. The author clearly has a problem with using more graphic terms, so there’s lots of “warm passages” and the like. The one that make me want to throw my Kindle against the wall was “essence” for sperm, and essence is used a lot. There’s much fanfic cliche too, the characters are always saying “Come for me” in fact they pretty much say it at every orgasm, and in fact the sex is quite repetitive although some might find it arousing.

As for an historical grounding, there is hardly any. We are told a war is going on, and Matt pops off in between injuries then comes back and “recovers” a bit more which involves sex, massages, wine(!), coffee(!), but you never get the atmosphere of London at war. Rationing is mentioned, but there’s no real impact of it in their day-to-day life.  They drink wine, and in one scene–in December–they eat lasagne and have strawberries for dessert. Words fail me. Where would they have got the strawberries from? Spain? I think the author lost control of her own timeline at this point, as she had them planning a picnic shortly afterwards.

1944 was a hugely important time in London’s war as the V2 rockets were fired at the city–look at this map here–but there’s no mention at all of any bombs, or indeed of anything much. I found this amazing, because the devstation was immense. Selfridges, Speakers Corner and Holborn was all bombed, but Trynt doesn’t seem to notice.

Matt’s involvement in the war is very confusing too. We are told he’s the captain of a squadron, and that he flies Spitfires, but we are also told that he leads bombing raids, and is also fighting on the ground with the infantry. In fact there’s so much wrong with the military details I’m not even going to discuss it.

Then there’s the OKHomo. Unsurprisingly really, seeing as this is converted Torchwood fic, but in 1944 London it’s absolutely mad. Everyone knows and just about everyone lurves the idea of it, understands it completely and the one person who doesn’t has something over him–blackmarket activity–which prevents him doing anything about it and he’s won over by the homo-love by the end anyway. The author makes a sop to having Matt and Trynt be careful in public but it’s purely pasted on, as their behaviour would be obvious to anyone.

And that’s about it, really. Conflict happens about 60% of the way through, which calls for a major crying jag from Trynt as the melodrama is plastered on with a trowel. The conflict lasts for about one chapter, though and the remaining 25% of the book is taken up with the inevitable HEA which loses a lot of its impact because how could they be any more soppy and romantic than they already have been almost on every page?

So, no. I didn’t like this book at all. It had just about every aspect of m/m that I dislike and layered it all up so thickly I felt like giving up.

IF you can handle the constant weeping, pages of declarations of love, long talky sex, constantly crying men on a wallpaper war background with decidedly shaky historical accuracy–and IF you don’t already know the Torchwood fanon, then you might like this. But I’m sorry, I didn’t.

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8 Responses

  1. This review is interesting because it highlights some of the key differences in reader expectations for fanfiction and original fiction. In slash fiction, “fluffy” emotional interactions,high melodrama, weepy male protagonists, and frequent hurt/comfort scenarios are not uncommon, and even welcomed by many readers seeking just that. However, with original fiction, readers tend to be more interested in believable characters and storylines.

    Another difference is that in fanfiction readers want to recognize the characters they know and love; in original fiction, they want to get to know characters who are unfamiliar. I can see how this novella might have been very popular in its original form as a Torchwood fanfic, but the same qualities that would endear this to a fandom audience are likely to turn off those who read this as original fiction. As many M/M writers start off in fandom, it’s important to be able to recognize these distinctions when writing for a wider (and often more discriminating) set of readers.

    • Now I wish I had the ability to say what you said, so succinctly. You are exactly right. I did exactly the same thing when I made the jump, my characters were more on the girlie side, but I’ve learned, and hopefully they are nothing like that now!

  2. “Stormy blue eyes,” huh? I was hoping for maybe a little Charioteer fanfic. But Ralph Lanyon would kick these fakes right out the door. Too bad, too. I’m always up for WW2 historicals but I’ll give this weeper a miss.

  3. Oh I reviewed this one at some point. I did not recognize Torchwood fandom, because I only heard of the show, never watched, dont know the characters, etc. I just could not get past all the over the top melodramatic dialogue, personally. And of course there is that cosy picture of people fighting a war and relaxing or recuperating in those nicely equipped hospitals. Sigh.

    • yes, to be honest, there was a lot more I could have said – having a doctor almost constantly on the ward and wearing scrubs nearly made me send the book back with a “no thank you” because I could tell it was going to be shoddily researched. But I didn’t want to do a hatchet job on it. I hope that Ms Lee tries again with something original and tones down the smoosh. Now I’ve reviewed it, I’ve sought out other reviews and am relieved that 2 stars seems to be the average that everyone is giving it.

  4. I’ve just started reading and absolutely agree with your review! Unfortunately I didn’t come across it a couple days earlier that might have spared my credit card. The blurb really had potential and I’ve actually WAITED for the release after finding it on MLR’s Coming Soon page and now feel totally cheated! I’ve never watched Torchwood but it really felt like fanfic to me, highly unrealistic and not in the least like a historical with the dialog and dialog/sex scenes driving me mad…and I’ve only read about 50 pages :-) Don’t know if I’ll finish…it doesn’t seem to improve!

    Thank you for the acurate review. Spot on!!!

    • I’m afraid it doesn’t, in fact the things that are driving you mad get more and more as they go on. It’s a real shame because the era has so much potential

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